From 069fad64a2b20dcb7883d104a4d48c3f749cf636 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Richard Soderberg <rsoderberg@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 2 Apr 2012 01:46:21 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] rewrite some of the text for clarity
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docs/DEPLOYMENT.md | 18 +++++++++---------
1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
diff --git a/docs/DEPLOYMENT.md b/docs/DEPLOYMENT.md
index f5ee8ccbc..76e01e383 100644
--- a/docs/DEPLOYMENT.md
+++ b/docs/DEPLOYMENT.md
@@ -109,24 +109,24 @@ Subsequent steps use different software which you might need to install.
### 5. Set up git post-update hook
-*This step is optional* - if you want to manually update code you
- probably skipped step #1, you can skip this one as well. All you need
+*This step is optional* - if you want to manually update code, then you
+probably skipped step #1; you can skip this one as well. All you need
to do is check out the code from github and run node.
-Given we've now got a simple way to push updates to the server, and
+Given that we've now got a simple way to push updates to the server, and
we've got npm and node running, let's get the software running! The task
-here is as a `post-update` hook (triggered by pushing changes to the server)
-to have the server update its code and restart the server.
+here is to create a git `post-update` hook to have the server update its
+code and restart the server when code is pushed.
-To get this done, we'll create a "post-update hook" which will live on your
-server under the git user's directory:
+To get this done, we'll configure a hook which will live on your server
+in the git user's git directory:
First, [do this] to add a blank executable post-update hook.
[do this]: http://sitaramc.github.com/gitolite/hooks.html
-Now, here's a full sample script that you can start with in that
-post update hook, annotated to help you follow along:
+Now, here's a full sample script that you can start with for that
+post-update hook, annotated to help you follow along:
<pre>
#!/bin/bash
--
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