From 49e79236480b584c027937775eef049fc6e90d06 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lloyd Hilaiel <lloyd@hilaiel.com>
Date: Sat, 16 Apr 2011 08:53:16 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] README language tweaks.  trying not to be lame.

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 README.md | 6 ++----
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 958a2579a..65abfacbf 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -3,12 +3,10 @@ This is an exploration of the distributed identity system
 
 ## Required software:
 
-All of the servers present in this repository are based on node.js, and a
-minimal but non-zero number of 3rd party node modules are required to make
-it go.  [npm](http://npmjs.org/) is a good tool to use to acquire the requisite modules.
+All of the servers here are based on node.js, and some number of 3rd party node modules are required to make them go.  ([npm](http://npmjs.org/) is a good way to get these libraries)
 
 * node.js (>= 0.4.5): http://nodejs.org/
-* The connect framework (>= 1.3.0): http://senchalabs.github.com/connect/
+* connect (>= 1.3.0): http://senchalabs.github.com/connect/
 * xml2js (>= 0.1.5)
 * sqlite (>= 1.0.3)
 * mustache (>= 0.3.1)
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